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 =Humanity =

 As humans, we have some positive and negative characteristics that make us who we are. Some positive things are our ability to endure pain for a certain goal, and being able to learn from mistakes. For example, when Thomas Edison first tried to make a light bulb, he knew it was going to be hard. He may have failed over 1000 times, but he ignored his failure and succeeded at last. However, there are some negative things about us that make us worse than animals. Some that cannot be ignored are independence, and greed. For example, during the French Revolution, France was bankrupt. At the time, the queen Marie Antoinette, had an extravagant lifestyle and had no understanding of her country's problems. Because of her low understanding and greed, she bought a diamond necklace that cost more than the income of France. To be human, is very hard to explain. However, it does require having some positive and negative characteristics that other living things may not have.   Great use of examples to support your ideas!  5/6    
 * 1 picture) People will endure anything for a goal, this person in the cage will endure anything to get out of this cage. **
 * 2 picture) Most people in the world is poor because of greed, rich people take everything and poor people get the rest, which doesn't even make 5% of the world. **